1
My favorite shop is on the other side of the supermarket.
2
There seems to be sometheng accident with my PC. My PC can't have a print.
3
I think that NHK books aren't selling very well. But these book series are my favorite!
4
I done without lunch today. So I am hungry!
5
I want to apologize to my family for my rude.
添削：
2
There seems to be sometheng accident with my PC. My PC can't have a print. -> "sometheng accident" は正しい表現ではありません。正しいのは "something wrong" です。また、"My PC can't have a print." の部分も自然ではありません。正しい表現は "My PC can't print." です。
修正案: "There seems to be something wrong with my PC. It can't print."
3
"NHK books aren't selling very well." の文は自然ですが、"these book series" は不自然な表現です。代わりに "this book series" を使うべきです。
修正案: "I think that NHK books aren't selling very well. But this book series is my favorite!"
4
I done without lunch today. So I am hungry! -> "I done without lunch today." の部分は文法的に正しくありません。正しい表現は "I didn't have lunch today." です。
修正案: "I didn't have lunch today. So I am hungry!"
5
"rude" は形容詞なので、名詞の後ろには使えません。正しい表現は "rudeness" です。また、"for my rude" の部分は "for being rude" と言い換えるべきです。
修正案: "I want to apologize to my family for my rudeness."
